My Spring Haiku

Spring is in the air

It has finally arrived

With a bit of cold

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3 responses to “My Spring Haiku

  1. You caught it perfectly…

  2. More than a bit of cold here…snow, wind. Yuck. But it is here never-the-less.

  3. Paul

    If this were my poem, the last line would be, “with a heap of snow!” I like the mingled, tempered, tentative sense you’ve created here — spring has arrived, but not quite, but…

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